The Internet has changed the world. Everything we used to have to go out to do is now able to be done within the comfort of your own home. Like the way we communicate, pay bills, how we can get educated, and how we can shop. The Internet has made life easier.
"Back in those old days, we used to call mom on the phone once a week to check in and catch up. Now, we can log on to our favorite Internet chat client or call her on our Internet phone and talk to mom everyday." (Braxton Heitz) The way we communicate has changed. We can now go online to a chat site and talk to people over the Internet instead of having to phone them and talk to them over the phone. A chat site would also be better than a phone because you can talk to more than one person at a time.
"When it is time to pay bills, we log on to the Internet, pull out our debit cards or credit cards, and then we get to work paying our bills online. It is no longer the case where we have to sit down at the dining room table with our checkbook, a stack of bills, and a book of stamps." (Braxton Heitz) By being able to pay bills online it has change the world. We can now go online and pay bills instead of having to sit down and then take the bills to the post office. This makes life easier.
"Nearly any topic that might be of interest to us can be learned, after a trip to our favorite search engines. We could even go further and enroll at a major university online.We can now take classes and get a degree at our favorite university or college, even if we live one thousand miles away from the school." (Braxton Heitz) By being able to look up research on a certain topic it can save you time. You can find information on a certain topic you are researching instead of having to look spend numerous amounts of time looking through a book trying to find the information you need. You can now enroll for a university online. By doing this you can take classes from the comfort of your own home.
"These days, we can go online to learn all about any single product or service we might be interested in purchasing. Even better, we can look at a cross-section of products under the same classification and make an intelligent decision based on factual research." (Braxton Heitz)
Shopping online can make life easier for you. You can now go online and buy a product. While you are shopping online you can also easily find out which is the better deal for a product, and which product is better.
The Internet has changed the world. More people go online because there is more you can do online now. With the Internet we can now do more from our own home. We can even take it with us wherever we go. With everything we can do now on the Internet it has changed the world because more people are on the Internet instead of going out.
"Back in those old days, we used to call mom on the phone once a week to check in and catch up. Now, we can log on to our favorite Internet chat client or call her on our Internet phone and talk to mom everyday." (Braxton Heitz) The way we communicate has changed. We can now go online to a chat site and talk to people over the Internet instead of having to phone them and talk to them over the phone. A chat site would also be better than a phone because you can talk to more than one person at a time.
"When it is time to pay bills, we log on to the Internet, pull out our debit cards or credit cards, and then we get to work paying our bills online. It is no longer the case where we have to sit down at the dining room table with our checkbook, a stack of bills, and a book of stamps." (Braxton Heitz) By being able to pay bills online it has change the world. We can now go online and pay bills instead of having to sit down and then take the bills to the post office. This makes life easier.
"Nearly any topic that might be of interest to us can be learned, after a trip to our favorite search engines. We could even go further and enroll at a major university online.We can now take classes and get a degree at our favorite university or college, even if we live one thousand miles away from the school." (Braxton Heitz) By being able to look up research on a certain topic it can save you time. You can find information on a certain topic you are researching instead of having to look spend numerous amounts of time looking through a book trying to find the information you need. You can now enroll for a university online. By doing this you can take classes from the comfort of your own home.
"These days, we can go online to learn all about any single product or service we might be interested in purchasing. Even better, we can look at a cross-section of products under the same classification and make an intelligent decision based on factual research." (Braxton Heitz)
Shopping online can make life easier for you. You can now go online and buy a product. While you are shopping online you can also easily find out which is the better deal for a product, and which product is better.
The Internet has changed the world. More people go online because there is more you can do online now. With the Internet we can now do more from our own home. We can even take it with us wherever we go. With everything we can do now on the Internet it has changed the world because more people are on the Internet instead of going out.
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Layne your blog is good but it has quite a bit of errors. You need to make sure you have spaces where they are needed. Make sure you make the word off like that and not of. In some of your sentences you may need to rearange the order of the words.
ReplyDeleteThere are a few places where you need a space in the first 4 paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteYou were fairly repetitive and you only have one name hyper-linked.
Way to go :)
Hello Layne.....there are some grammer errors. you said the same thing many of times.
ReplyDeleteDear Layne, this essay was very good but you have some gramatical errors you should fix.I like your wording and your basic thought of this essay. It is a very good start to your essay so keep up the good work and im sure that you with get a really good mark on this!! :)
ReplyDeleteVery good job layne. You proved your thesis very well!! just read it over and check for gramatical errors. If you wanted you could add pictures or a video to make the eassay more interesting. GOOD JOB LANEY!!:)
ReplyDeleteyou could maybe use some pitcures or video to make it a little more interesting. it could use a little more info around the quotes. You did a good job layne.
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